In  Today's session  in the morning we were doing lots of  editing.After break Derek  came,

we showed our rough edit to  Derek.  we weretalking what  is our video about,how does it going to  efffect other teenagers,and what else do we going to   have to  do  ... we pointed out that if some  teenagers will  watch that video,and if they're in the same situation they will  think  maybe,that they should ask  someone's help  not just like  stay how it is.They will seiously think. He said that if we want to  make  them think then   we really  have to  do  it something like really  special to think,how in the real  life is. We now realise that we need   to  do it everything more realistic, like there is one scene that the girl  has a bruise and she doesnt show to  her friend,he said it would more realistic,if she  could show it  to  her friend. because in that scene you cant actually  see her bruise.he  really  liked the bit when  a  girl  found out that  her boyfriend was cheating on her,because he said that before he was thinking how do  we are going to  show,that is going to  be really  hard to  show it,but after he said its really  good an idea.He didnt really  like the bit with  a facebook  chat.He suggested  like that we could add some effects on it,on a chat some circle around,and he said that a chat is a bit to  long,so  we have to  make it more sorter.

After he left we were doing some more editing,we corrected the things that he said we should change it,we found some music to put on it,to make everything more sad.we finnish everything for the next lesson we will going to  have to  work on our folders,to  finnish it of everything.